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Tuesday 12 November 2013

The basketball star Slam !

One day a kid had a dream of being the world’s best basketball player and entering the world basketball tournament and his name was Slam. As he got older, he became a basketball player and was the leader of the NBA Globetrotters. He has black hair, a brown skin tone, a red, yellow and orange top, green and purple pants and a pair of multi-coloured shoes.

Others thought of him as a role model but other teams were jealous of him and tried to beat him by cheating so when Slam entered the tournament, they did too. Slam and his team kept on trying but the other team kept on blocking them by cheating so Slam let them win.

Once the other team won they entered world tournament continued to win by cheating.They kept beating Slam every single year because Slam kept on letting them win. When the winning team retired and never bugged Slam and his team ever again.

After they retired, the NBA Globetrotters entered the tournament and they won. They entered the world tournament and came second place. They continued to enter the tournament every year but they always came second place. When they retired, they trained newbies that had the same dream and hope of coming first.

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hello Benjamin, I really like your narrative because it shows everything a narrative should have and you used a lot of imagination to make it interesting.

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